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Given 2014-07-24
Autumn Is In My Eyes by OptimalDecay uses seasonal language and carefully-placed rhyme to great effect ( Suggested by TwilightPoetess and Featured by ShadowedAcolyte )
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artbyfieldsofsage Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beauty in truth.  I like your mention of a merry-go-round.  One of my sisters always tells me that "life is like a merry-go-round ... we each take our turn ... and at some point the ride is over and it is time to get off and let someone else take their turn."  However, until I read your poem I had never considered it all a "circus."  And it is!  Ah, I'll add that little bit of info to my mortal thoughts.  Congrats on the DD!
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LifeIsARazorBlade Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
Thank you sincerely for your feedback!
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artbyfieldsofsage Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You are so very welcome.  I just read another work of your's and left a comment (which you've probably noticed already).  Love your work:)
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saevuswinds Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Student Writer
Congrats on the DD!
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cristinewakesuphappy Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:iconcongratsdd1plz::iconcongratsdd2plz::iconcongratsdd3plz:
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COLOREDINLOVE Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful creative energies flowing into you..and your passionately rhythmic patterns falling lightly around you...Awesome!! Well done honey!
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COLOREDINLOVE Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Have-a-Great-Day by KmyGraphic  Awesome by KmyGraphic  You're my Favorite by KmyGraphic  
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
I’m very happy for you!!! :iconloveloveplz: :tighthug:
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91816119 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014   Writer
Oh my, congratulations on the DD, my friend! I absolutely adore this, the flow is stunning and your words are almost lyrical. The alliteration (one of my favourite literary devices when it comes to poetry) creates this fantastic energy in your lines that just builds and builds throughout. Fantastic. :clap:
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LifeIsARazorBlade Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
Thank you!
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91816119 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014   Writer
You're very welcome! :hug:
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essencestudios Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014   Traditional Artist
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xxaihxx Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014   Traditional Artist
Congratulations on the DD!
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LAN0RA Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
and here i thought you'd get a d.d. for your photography before you ever got one for poems!

well, it just goes to show you people still read!!! :rofl: :hug: 

:iconloveyouplz: lovely poem, hun! :heart:
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LifeIsARazorBlade Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014
I honestly expected a photo DD before this. I am shocked. My photography is better than my writing, by a wide margin, most of the time.

I literally am dumbstruck at this honor...
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WickedOwl514 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Congratulations on the DD!keep up the wonderful writing!!
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LifeIsARazorBlade Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014
Thanks, you. :)
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WickedOwl514 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! :) (Smile) 
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ardentfem Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Professional General Artist
Beautiful, haunting and wonderful rhythm. As an artist, I feel like I try to capture this sort of essence. Well done and well deserved.
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LifeIsARazorBlade Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014
*warm smile* Thank you!
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AyeAye12 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Student Writer
Congrats on the DD! :tophateager: 
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LifeIsARazorBlade Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014
WOOT WOOT!
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BellaRomatica Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014
YAAAAAAAAAS! Congrats on the DD when I saw your name I was like heck yea at least this dude deserves one! :p
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katmary Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful, I love that last line Heart 
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meagerwages Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
You captured my heart with this poem, congrats!
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AndanteEcho Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Student Writer
This poem has something special. It is really striking and poignant. Great job, beautiful poem. 
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LifeIsARazorBlade Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
Thank you for reading it, and I am glad you enjoyed it!

- mids
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Jessica-Lorraine-Z Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Professional General Artist
Gorgeous. :heart:
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LifeIsARazorBlade Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
Rainbow doge emote 
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello :wave:
You have been featured in my dA love for everyone! article.
Have a nice day! :dalove:
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LifeIsARazorBlade Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
facepalm 
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CobaltOfMarch Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
This is a wonderful piece of writing, so moving and powerful. I'm enchanted.
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LifeIsARazorBlade Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
Thank you!
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snowywolf13 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful.
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